The mission of the YMCA of Greater Providence is to build healthy spirit, mind and body for all, through programs, services and relationships that are based upon our core values of caring, honesty, respect and responsibility.
The vision of the YMCA of greater providence is to become the most valued resource for families and individuals seeking healthy lifestyles and wellness.
In my own words the mission statement for The YMCA of Greater Providence is that they exist to help individuals and families develop an active body, mind and spirit. The YMCA has programs and services to promote that. The core values are caring, honesty, respect and responsibility.
I do not believe there is any problems with this mission statement. The values that this mission statement articulates are caring, honesty, respect and responsibility. I can agree with these values and they are good values for an individual to have.
According to the mission statement sample website a mission statement should be one sentence describing why the organization exists. The mission statement should be clear, concise, and useful. It should be 5-14 words 20 words maximum. With that being said I believe that the YMCA of Greater Providence Mission statement is too wordy. I also believe that the words that are being used gets the point across and there are not any words that I had to look up.
Thanks for your post Kristen. Does the mission statement for the Y align with the work you do and observe there? What do you value most about the organization and is that reflected in the mission statement?
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Victoria
I really like your post and how you made it simple and short and I agree with how it's to wordy and it needs to be shorter. Your reasons on how to make it to the point is very helpful on you put that information on your blog, cause now Ill keep looking back on it for help.
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